I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Addison I think it is cool that you scored goalie in soccer,I like that you put a goal as try to get better at math and writing maybe next time you can try to make more goals for school blog you later
Hola Addison, I really like this cool blog post. I think its awesome that you can score goals in soccer. Was this fun? When did you score a goal in soccer?
Heo Addi, Shyla here. I'm very impressed with this piece of work.Your achievements are interesting. Next time you could to create longer sentences, other than that this is pretty good. I like this Addi, I think you deserve a little pat on the back.
Kia ora Addison, I like how you listed five things you are proud of. Being a goalie can be hard sometimes but it takes practice. Did you block any goals? You can try making the text bigger after the Google Drawing.
Talofa lava Addison, WOW you have accomplished a lot of things in term 1, and you must be proud of yourself, I think the way you put it is amazing. Maybe next time you could a explanation of what you have done at the begging, but other then that this is great. Bye Bye Blog You Later
Aloha Addison! I'm impressed here. Your achievements are awesome! I think getting to be goalie is nice! Maybe you could add to your sentences or add more info about them. Other than that, good goals! From Mikayla.
Aloha Addison I think it is cool you are the goalie in your soccer team I like that you put this on your blog maybe next time you should add punctacation blog you later.
Kia ora Addison it's me Miss Johnstone! Wow you knocked my socks off with this blog post, I especially enjoyed reading through all of your goals. You have a lot to be proud of! Did you know that your Mum told me that you sometimes don't do as you are told at home, AND that your bedroom is often messy still!! (Don't worry, mine is too). Next time I reckon you could add some more things that you are proud of at school. I know for a fact, that there is lots! Anyway, see ya later. Miss Johnstone
Hi Addison, Courtney here. You have done a good job on this post and my favourite thing your proud of is trying not to annoy you brother when he is playing fornite cause I hate it too when people annoy me when I'm playing my game. You next step is probably writing more things your proud of and yeah. Why are you proud of these things??
kia ora Addison i love youre blog post it is relly good you even knocked my socks off so much when i read youre post i lernt that you put a lot of effort in it.
Hi there addison i really like the post that you are making and im am enjoying reading that post and make sure that you also can make some few words. i also hate my brother annoys me while i'm playing my game. see ya later, BYE!
I enjoyed the part when said you have lots of goals to do for the year! the facts you have used are very good maybe next time you could till me more about your Goals next time from olivia h
Hi it brodie.I enjoyed the part when you said you want annoy me well i'm playing fortnite with my friend Did you think about just cleaning your room after school today why did you but this up about your goals on the tearm.
kia ora Addison this is Raewyn I like how you put on the background. do you know that is all of my favourite colours? I would like to see more of the same thing but diffrent. your classmate Raewyn.
Ola Addison, Riley here i like this post wonder what it is like to be goalie at soccer can you tell me please i would love that your brother fornite? why did you put that on your post he can live with it i would annoy i got told i don't care i got to annoy my brother at least i got to annoy my brother:)hehe a thing you could work on is make it stand out more like add more colour our something that could make it nice,
Hey Addison its Me Kaycee your best friend. I love Your Post because i really like how you said that you are going to do the things you get told to Do. When I read your post I learnt That i need to do what i've been told! you no what i like being in my own World to be honest Next time you could add a bit more THings about school! Well ill see you later bestie!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Addison i like your'e wow word's in your'e proud and Achievement post
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ReplyDeletei don't think you try not to annoy your brother i think you do annoy your brother
Kia Ora Addison
ReplyDeleteI think it is cool that you scored goalie in soccer,I like that you put a goal as try to get better at math and writing
maybe next time you can try to make more goals for school
blog you later
Hola Addison,
ReplyDeleteI really like this cool blog post. I think its awesome that you can score goals in soccer. Was this fun? When did you score a goal in soccer?
Heo Addi, Shyla here.
ReplyDeleteI'm very impressed with this piece of work.Your achievements are interesting. Next time you could to create longer sentences, other than that this is pretty good. I like this Addi, I think you deserve a little pat on the back.
Kia ora Addison,
ReplyDeleteI like how you listed five things you are proud of. Being a goalie can be hard sometimes but it takes practice. Did you block any goals? You can try making the text bigger after the Google Drawing.
Talofa lava Addison,
ReplyDeleteWOW you have accomplished a lot of things in term 1, and you must be proud of yourself, I think the way you put it is amazing. Maybe next time you could a explanation of what you have done at the begging, but other then that this is great.
Bye Bye Blog You Later
Aloha Addison!
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed here. Your achievements are awesome! I think getting to be goalie is nice! Maybe you could add to your sentences or add more info about them. Other than that, good goals!
From Mikayla.
Aloha Addison
ReplyDeleteI think it is cool you are the goalie in your soccer team I like that you put this on your blog maybe next time you should add punctacation blog you later.
Kia ora Addison it's me Miss Johnstone!
ReplyDeleteWow you knocked my socks off with this blog post, I especially enjoyed reading through all of your goals. You have a lot to be proud of!
Did you know that your Mum told me that you sometimes don't do as you are told at home, AND that your bedroom is often messy still!! (Don't worry, mine is too).
Next time I reckon you could add some more things that you are proud of at school. I know for a fact, that there is lots!
Anyway, see ya later.
Miss Johnstone
aloha addision well done on being the goalie for your soccer team i like how you put this on your blog maybe next time add puntacation. blog you later
ReplyDeleteHi Addison, Courtney here.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a good job on this post and my favourite thing your proud of is trying not to annoy you brother when he is playing fornite cause I hate it too when people annoy me when I'm playing my game.
You next step is probably writing more things your proud of and yeah.
Why are you proud of these things??
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ReplyDeletekia ora Addison i love youre blog post
ReplyDeleteit is relly good you even knocked my socks off so much
when i read youre post i lernt that you put a
lot of effort in it.
Hi there addison i really like the post that you are making and im am enjoying reading that post and make sure that you also can make some few words. i also hate my brother annoys me while i'm playing my game. see ya later, BYE!
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when said you have lots of goals to do for the year!
ReplyDeletethe facts you have used are very good
maybe next time you could till me more about your Goals next time from olivia h
Hi Addison it's me Bea!
ReplyDeleteAddison you been good in class this year!
I like the way you been smiling in your friend!
And we love your blog!
Hi it brodie.I enjoyed the part when you said you want annoy me well i'm playing fortnite with my friend Did you think about just cleaning your room after school today why did you but this up about your goals on the tearm.
ReplyDeletekia ora Addison this is Raewyn I like how you put on the background. do you know that is all of my favourite colours? I would like to see more of the same thing but diffrent. your classmate Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteHi it's Jonte here i would like to say that i like how you did the poets because it is awesome by by
ReplyDeleteyou are good at not annoying your brother when he is playing fortnite
ReplyDeleteOla Addison, Riley here i like this post wonder what it is like to be goalie at soccer can you tell me please i would love that your brother fornite? why did you put that on your post he can live with it i would annoy i got told i don't care i got to annoy my brother at least i got to annoy my brother:)hehe a thing you could work on is make it stand out more like add more colour our something that could make it nice,
ReplyDeletewell i have to do more bloging adios Riley.
Hey Addison its Me Kaycee your best friend.
ReplyDeleteI love Your Post because i really like how you said that you are going to do the things you get told to Do.
When I read your post I learnt That i need to do what i've been told! you no what i like being in my own World to be honest
Next time you could add a bit more THings about school!
Well ill see you later bestie!
I love my goals. My goals is to do paragraphs.bye
ReplyDeletein term 2 my goal is to be the smartest in the school.
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