I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia ora Addison I love the way you put the date of the war.Next time you can maybe put the background to the thing you are talking about or just a image. I liked the way you put what they eat and how you talked about why they used animals in the war. I love the way you did what the poppies mean in the war and why we wear them.
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kia ora Addison
ReplyDeleteI love the way you put the date of the war.Next time you can maybe put the background to the thing you are talking about or just a image. I liked the way you put what they eat and how you talked about why they used animals in the war. I love the way you did what the poppies mean in the war and why we wear them.