I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow you have learned a lot about turtles Addison! I didn't know that turtles eat insects and worms. Next time you could use a darker font on some pages so it is easier to read. (Or maybe I just need to put my new glasses on!) :) Mrs Hey
Ki ora Kian here i really like your turtle blog but maybe next time you could recheck your spelling so it makes sense and so people can read it more clearly but i love your information about the turtles though . Just one question could you please do another sea creature or reptile or animal i love learning about this sort of stuff
Hey Addison its Acasia here from Gilberthorpe school. I really like how you have told a lot about turtles. You have I never knew a lot of these facts about turtles! Will you ever do the same thing as what you have done what with another animal?
Hi Addson it is Cayleigh here from Gilberthorpe school . I like your side about turtles I like how you but your work on your blog. about maybe next time you can put what you are going to do next time. do you like learning about turtles?
Hi Addison! I really enjoy your turtles slide, I like the waves you created with the background of your slide, but on slide six, there is a tiny mistake, intelligent comes with a "I" not a "E" Amazing post By the way.
kia ora it's me banana i liked the way you put all 7 types of turtles like the snapping turtles you brought me back to when we did the slide turtles and reptiles next time you could put more wow worlds go bye benaiah
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Wow you have learned a lot about turtles Addison! I didn't know that turtles eat insects and worms. Next time you could use a darker font on some pages so it is easier to read. (Or maybe I just need to put my new glasses on!) :) Mrs Hey
ReplyDeleteKi ora Kian here i really like your turtle blog but maybe next time you could recheck your spelling so it makes sense and so people can read it more clearly but i love your information about the turtles though . Just one question could you please do another sea creature or reptile or animal i love learning about this sort of stuff
ReplyDeleteHey Addison its Acasia here from Gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have told a lot about turtles. You have I never knew a lot of these facts about turtles!
Will you ever do the same thing as what you have done what with another animal?
Hi Addson it is Cayleigh here from Gilberthorpe school .
ReplyDeleteI like your side about turtles I like how you but your work on your blog. about maybe next time you can put what you are going to do next time.
do you like learning about turtles?
Hi Addison! I really enjoy your turtles slide, I like the waves you created with the background of your slide, but on slide six, there is a tiny mistake, intelligent comes with a "I" not a "E" Amazing post By the way.
ReplyDeletehi this ethan i love what u are doing for u silde and u howere bolg its so cool and the turles like nice and cute but thanks about the turles
ReplyDeletehi its Cody fun fact turtles don,t snapp bye
ReplyDeletei love what you have been working on in reading i was doing that for reading as well i drawed my own turtle picture Kacey's sister helped me
ReplyDeleteHI Its Hakeem And I LOVE TERTILS!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletekia ora it's me banana
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put all 7 types of turtles like the snapping turtles
you brought me back to when we did the slide turtles and reptiles next time you could put more wow worlds go bye
benaiah
Hi it's Nikau i like how you used wow words.when i read your post i learnt how turtles breathe and sleep.How did you get all this information
ReplyDeletehi its Cody why did you put snapping did you think sorry if that would hert your your felling bye
ReplyDeleteHi Addison it is micah i love your photo and you Give some ideas
ReplyDeleteHi Addison good job
ReplyDeletehi it is Marsali I love turles I love the there are nice
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