I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Addison. Wow. You got this work done quickly. I will go through it at our Meet today so you can remove me and insert a picture of you in the middle. We also might elaborate on your ideas more.
Hi Addison, a good trick to get into the habit of extending your ideas is to add a "because..." onto the end. That way, you're being more specific and including more description.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Addison.
ReplyDeleteWow. You got this work done quickly. I will go through it at our Meet today so you can remove me and insert a picture of you in the middle. We also might elaborate on your ideas more.
Hi Addison,
ReplyDeletea good trick to get into the habit of extending your ideas is to add a "because..." onto the end. That way, you're being more specific and including more description.