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Tuesday, 25 June 2019

This is what I have been doing for writing

Address Gilberthorpe school 
163  

Date  24 of June 

Dear Builder Dave 

Can you build my school a new playground?



Reason: Because it is a bit boring and it needs an update because it is old and it is slowly breaking we need a touch up because  the… COLOUR IS FADING AWAY!!!! We need a new playground straight away and it needs to be bigger!!!!.




Example: So kids are actually playing on the playground instead of walking around borderless and so they aren't just sitting down AND So They can have some FUN once in a while.

                                                        List for new playground
X4 Swings
X2 roundabout 
X3 slides 
X4 flying foxes
X2 climbing walls
 X1 bridge
X1 Optical course
X1 10ft platform with a big slide going down
X2 Water parks
 X3 Drinking fountains  


Have a nice day, Sincerely Addison

2 comments:

  1. Bola,Addi.
    I like your writing because did a lot but your writing is off the page you now. maybe you can do a little bit more then you are now. why did you put it on your blog?

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  2. Hi Addison! What a great idea to improve our school playground. It's hard because new playground equipment costs a lot of money! If you could only add one or two extra things what would you want? I think more flying foxes would be awesome!

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