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Hi Addison, Miss Rowland here! I love how colourful you've made your ad. Next time, maybe you can include some of the food that heroburger has to help convince people it is the best restaurant!
hi addi i liked the way you put the cars on the post you brought me back to when we did it and it was cool next time you could put some more cars bye addi
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Hi Addison, Miss Rowland here! I love how colourful you've made your ad. Next time, maybe you can include some of the food that heroburger has to help convince people it is the best restaurant!
ReplyDeletehi addi
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the cars on the post
you brought me back to when we did it and it was cool
next time you could put some more cars
bye addi