Matariki
Today we did work about Matariki and we had to make a slide and you could share it with your friends to collaborate together I created it and then these people are the authors Benaiah, Jason, Addison, Nikau, Ethan and here it is hope you like it.
It was really fun to create I would do this again blog you later.
You and your group have started to create an interesting slide. Some of the information is a bit out of date. The slide seems unfinished so we will need to work on our publishing skills.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Addison,
ReplyDeleteThis is really interesting information. Why did you learn about Matariki?
Your slide has pretty colours. There are lots of words for your reader. I wonder if you could add a video or some pictures to help them understand better?
- Miss Morgan
kia ora addision. i liked how you showed the stars of matariki. i love how you have information on the stars. next time the writing could be bigger on the slideshow so we can read all parts of your work clearly?
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Hola Addison! Christina Here From ur Class haha!
ReplyDeleteI like this slide about matariki because it has good information about it.
Next time could you add a background or change the font colour cause
I cant see the text really well other then that its good! #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA
Hi Christina, Addison here, Thank you next time I will change the font colour to a more brighter colour so more people can see it BLog You Later.
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ReplyDeleteI´m robert I like to comment with your stuff because it beautiful nice jop addison.
Kia ora Addison Nikau here.I really like the background and it has really good information about matariki and it didn't really take us that long either.Next time could you change the background like Christina said because some of the text I cant see.Otherwise I have bad eye sight.
ReplyDeleteHi addison Its Brodie here.
ReplyDeletei like how you posted this on your blog it looks cool.
You have good information to tell us what you are doing.
this took me back when we did this slide together.
blog you later..
Kia ora Addison I'm Basty from your class.
ReplyDeleteI see you and your team worked hard to get them all done. Nice researching about Matariki. Next time you might put more words in the introduction so we understand more in your work. Bye.
Kia ora Addison good job posting thing to your blog like the matariki.
ReplyDeletekeep up the work and great fact's!
Bonjour Addison, Riley here!
ReplyDeleteit's nice to know a little bit more about Matariki.
Next time you could add like your next steps and a little more information, And change the background because it's a little hard to see.
Anyways that's all I have Bye!
Kia Ora Addison. Isabella here.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the front of the slide it really caught my eye.
Also Loved the way how you did a collaboration :)
Maybe Next time you could change the colour and size so we can see the writing more.
Over all Still really good😊
hi Addison it's Benaiah here.
ReplyDeletei liked how you posted this on your blog.
maybe next time you could put some more facts.
this took me back when we did it together.
see you soon
Kia Ora Addison, Phoebe here.
ReplyDeleteThe facts is really good and interesting!
Maybe next time you can make your background more beautiful and some more facts about it?
Bye, see you soon
hi addison
ReplyDeleteit is casey here commenting on your blog it is amazing that you know about matariki some people dont know about matariki it is nice that you post this on your blog mabbey next time you could put a video in you slide show how matariki is celebrated.