I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Addison It is Lucy here is like the pitcher of flash maybe next time add more detall Addison you could add more coulor That was helpfull potive and thourght full. Blog you later
Kia ora Addison It is Kaycee here is like the photo of flash maybe next time add more details about your bird you could add more color That was helpful positive and thoughtful. Blog you later by Addison
Kia ora Addison It is Chevelle here. I like the photo of flash maybe next time add more details about your bird you could add more color That was helpful positive and thoughtful. Blog you later bye Addison.
Kia Ora Addison Trinity here, I like your blog post about Flash your best friend. I think you did a really good blog post. Good job Addison. Maybe next time you could add a longer information part at the top so we now what your blog post is about?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Addison It is Lucy here is like the pitcher of flash maybe next time add more detall Addison you could add more coulor That was helpfull potive and thourght full. Blog you later
ReplyDeleteKia ora Addison It is Kaycee here is like the photo of flash maybe next time add more details about your bird you could add more color That was helpful positive and thoughtful. Blog you later by Addison
ReplyDeleteKia ora Addison It is Chevelle here. I like the photo of flash maybe next time add more details about your bird you could add more color That was helpful positive and thoughtful. Blog you later bye Addison.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Addison Trinity here,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Flash your best friend. I think you did a really good blog post. Good job Addison.
Maybe next time you could add a longer information part at the top so we now what your blog post is about?
Blog you later.
Kia Ora Addison Shyla Here,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great blog post. Next time you could add more detail and explain more things about your post. But great job!