I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today we had to do a blog post about animals that we are going to see tomorrow because we are going to orana park this is my slide.
Hope you have a good day.
Bonjour Addison it is Lacie here. I like your slide about lions it is really interesting but maybe on fact two you could of added more writing or maybe even some photos. Is your favorutie animal a lion? Did you already know these facts or did you have to research about them?
kia ora Addison. I like the two facts about lions. Maybe you could think about adding another slide or two about their diet or maybe their life cycle. Blog you later byeeee!!!
hi Addison it's me bea here, I really like your slide about lions and maybe you could put more and the facts you have you used are really good & I like it. See you later
Kia Ora Addison AND I LOVE LIONS! Any Ways Your Two Facts We're Cool And Cute. Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Blog Post About Different Animal Facts. Blog Ya Later. Bye.
Kia ora Addison it's me kyle i just want to say this is very interesting even Ethan I would think this is very interesting.I did not know this about lions i like how you put this in a slide instead of a plane blog.Just won't to say nice work and keep it up.
Hi Addison its Aliyha here. I loved this because i really like lions.The facts you have used are really good. I like the pictures on the slide. Next time, you could add a bit more facts.
Kia Ora Addison, I really like how you decorated your presentation, and how you put facts that were interesting, Maybe it would probably much be more better if you put more facts than 2. Does mane represent the genders? Your post was great but I think it just need more facts.
Kia ora Addison Nice work on this i like fact one it was my favourite i also like how you made it pretty i like the background and more maybe next time you could change the font but good job
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Bonjour Addison it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your slide about lions it is really interesting but maybe on fact two you could of added more writing or maybe even some photos.
Is your favorutie animal a lion?
Did you already know these facts or did you have to research about them?
Yes lions are my favorite animal and yes i did have to do some research i will go and add some pictures on slide two
ReplyDeletekia ora Addison. I like the two facts about lions. Maybe you could think about adding another slide or two about their diet or maybe their life cycle. Blog you later byeeee!!!
ReplyDeletehi Addison it's me bea here,
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide about lions and maybe you could put more and the facts you have you used are really good & I like it.
See you later
Kia Ora Addison AND I LOVE LIONS! Any Ways Your Two Facts We're Cool And Cute. Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Blog Post About Different Animal Facts. Blog Ya Later. Bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Addison it's me kyle
ReplyDeletei just want to say this is very interesting even Ethan I
would think this is very interesting.I did not know this about lions i like how you put this in a slide instead of a plane blog.Just won't to say nice work and keep it up.
Hi Addison its Aliyha here.
ReplyDeleteI loved this because i really like lions.The facts you have used are really good. I like the pictures on the slide. Next time, you could add a bit more facts.
Kia Ora Addison, I really like how you decorated your presentation, and how you put facts that were interesting, Maybe it would probably much be more better if you put more facts than 2. Does mane represent the genders? Your post was great but I think it just need more facts.
ReplyDeletekia ora Addison it is Tane
ReplyDeletei love them facts about lions they are intereting
Kia ora Addison
ReplyDeleteNice work on this i like fact one it was my favourite i also like how you made it pretty i like the background and more maybe next time you could change the font but good job