I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today and yesterday we did a writing slide and here is mine hope you like it this is how i write my way because everyone's writing is different this is how i do mine.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Gilberthorpe School l enjoyed the part that l am in it Did you know…that you need more work and writing why did you get it now.
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