I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi addison good work on this blog post. how many nights didsthe sleepover go on for? Whos house was it at? I enjoyed ho you said what you were going to do. Maybe next time you might want to write a little bit more. Did you make this blog post at the time you had the sleepover?
Hi lacie it was at my house and it went on for one night we made it at the sleepover as you can see and i will try to write more have you had a sleepover.
Kia Ora Addison, it looks like you are having fun!! Was it fun? How many days did she stay? Also maybe next time you could look back at your writing. Looks fun. From:Milla
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awwww so cute Addison we need to have a sleep over!!
ReplyDeleteHi brooke we do need one but we have had one have you had a sleepover before.
Deletehi addi it cool to see my sis
ReplyDeleteHi luke have you had a sleepover before.
DeleteHi addison good work on this blog post. how many nights didsthe sleepover go on for? Whos house was it at? I enjoyed ho you said what you were going to do. Maybe next time you might want to write a little bit more. Did you make this blog post at the time you had the sleepover?
ReplyDeleteHi lacie it was at my house and it went on for one night we made it at the sleepover as you can see and i will try to write more have you had a sleepover.
DeleteKia Ora Addison, it looks like you are having fun!! Was it fun? How many days did she stay? Also maybe next time you could look back at your writing. Looks fun.
ReplyDeleteFrom:Milla